The writing here is innocuous enough she is figuratively describing her collecting happy memories and thoughts. In this first stanza, she opens up with some creepiness right off the bat. Happy thoughts, happy thoughts, happy thoughts in bottles, all in a row. I reach inside with my thumb and forefinger and pluck one out.īut there’s no time to waste! I put it in a bottle to keep it safe.Īnd I put the bottle on the shelf with all of the other bottles. Little balls of sunshine, all rubbing together like a bundle of kittens It’s the secret place where I keep all my dreams. I pop off my scalp like the lid of a cookie jar. In writing, although poetry isn’t strictly narrative in nature, we can use the same principle to structure our poems in such a way that allows the ‘action’ to flow from beat to beat while being coherent and logical. It’s kind of hard to describe, but usually when a character decides something in their mind, the next thing we usually will see is for them to behave in a way that reflects their new goal. A change in beat is followed by a sequence that leads to the next beat. We’re going to examine the emotional beats that help propel the direction of the poem.īeats are a term used in film and screenplay writing that are used to describe the smallest unit of emotion.
This is really the first time we come face to face with Sayori’s love of bittersweet poems, writing that has elements that are happy and sad at the same time. A poem that describes Sayori’s struggle with trying to help her friends smile, sometimes at the expense of her own feelings. Her tendency to sleep in was also described in her first poem ‘Dear Sunshine’ which is shared in the first poetry sharing meeting.ĭuring the second poetry sharing meeting, Sayori will share ‘Bottles’.
Her dialogue hides some subtle tidbits that hint to her depression such as her inability to wake up on time. On the outside, Sayori is carefree and cheerful, but as you proceed through the game, you will learn that she has been hiding her lifelong depression. The three girls: Yuri, Natsuki, or Sayori in order to advance the story. The club president, Monika, assigns her club members the task of writing The high school's Literature club after being tricked by his childhoodįriend, Sayori, to visit the clubroom after school. In DDLC, you play as the faceless main character (MC) who decides to join Today, I’m gonna break down ‘Bottles’ by Sayori from the game Doki Doki Literature Club.Īnd of course, for those of you who for some reason haven’t played this game, I suggest you do so before proceeding.
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